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Round is not a Pregnant shape, poem by Peter Menkin
For about 8 years I worked off and on at the department store Sears on a part time basis.It was mainly on. A few poems about observations while on duty as a sales clerk were written. Herewith, a poem from 2002 on what I saw at Sears. There were only a few of these poems, originally posted on the Atlantic Monthly Writer's Workshop (now defunct). I am sorry I did not write more of them, as 7 years later I like this one and another. One can't call two or three poems a series, and because I keep poems I've written on my computer, I will search to see if there are more. Some people think it unfair to be revising or looking at poems 7 or 8 years old. One poet remarked to me that this wasn't so unusual, to keep an image or a sense of a poem in ones mind for years. My way is to return to work written sometimes as long ago as 8 years or even nine, and revise. I find at times that I begin to like the poem, where before I did not like it so much or found it lacking. I do hope you like this one as it is an amusement. So as I say, herewith the poem: Round is not a Pregnant Shape by Peter Menkin Three pregnant women last night at the store. Each carried her self, proving round is not a pregnant shape. I watch the pregnant women as they shop, and walk, move about with children or alone. This is part of my store duties, I tell myself: Pregnant woman watching. There are ovals, and mountains, abundance, and full. There are heavier, and moving, ripe and blooming. Some are a little bit more. Amid this there is something new, alive, awakening to two and wonderment moving towards birth. View All Comments Comments (0)
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